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I am of other suns than you,
and in the light all I can see are your shadows.

He asks, "What's gotten into you lately?"
and she says, "Obviously not you."
You and me are the world, she says.~
Dedicated to my parents, let us hope that divorce is nigh.
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:iconyouinventedme:
YouInventedMe Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012   Writer
come on, Eileen.
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conformityphobe Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Indeed, beautiful stranger.
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neonxaos Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hmmm... Much to the point. The italicised lines work well as "shadows" of the first two lines. Good work.
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:iconconformityphobe:
conformityphobe Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
Thank you, kind stranger.~
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Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Are you okay?
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:iconconformityphobe:
conformityphobe Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
I am perfectly fine. This happened a while ago. I've gotten over it, but I thought it would make for good poetry.
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:iconkit-kat-tik-tak:
Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Just checking.
Still, wanna invest in a virtual hug?
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:iconconformityphobe:
conformityphobe Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
:glomp:
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:iconkit-kat-tik-tak:
Kit-Kat-Tik-Tak Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, respect my personal space. I mean I know I smell like flowers in a blender but oh my glob your making my agoraphobic self claustrophobic or [link]
LOVE YOU
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conformityphobe Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Psh, I politely decline your plea of personal space, but I do gladly accept your link.
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